[Request] Check over my easy HSK 1 pinyin dialogue :)

Hey all, I am just starting to learn Chinese. For our final exam, me and a colleague had to write a simple pinyin dialogue. We dont know much about Chinese yet, just basic words and basic structures. Could someone on here maybe check if the structure and the basic things are right? It is about 40 sentences, here is the imgur link

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https://imgur.com/gallery/MUediLI

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Thanks everyone! Zai jian :-)

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