Can someone help me check this speech for my class?

I have to do a presentation on my best friend for my mandarin class and I was hoping someone could look at it quickly for grammar mistakes. Sorry that it is a little long but if someone could help me that would be awesome!

大家好. 我的朋友名字是 Shayna。她非常漂亮！她头发和眉毛是咖啡色的。她眼睛是咖啡色的。 她脸圆圆的。她鼻子又圆又小。她嘴大大的。 她家很大！她有两个妹妹，爸爸，妈妈，一个狗。她的狗很好！我爱她的狗。她的狗和我的狗朋友！她喜欢看电视和打球。我们常常看电影。 她生日是一月八号。我们想去日本饭馆儿因为她喜欢日本吃。 我们会不但喝录茶而且咖啡。我喜欢茶但是她喜欢咖啡。我们吃寿司和米饭因为她爱寿司。我们常常去日本饭馆儿和吃寿司。 我想给她很好礼物。她爱鞋那么我会给蓝色的鞋。鞋非常贵但是我喜欢我的朋友那么我买鞋 鞋是八十塊。

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