请同行评审我中文的短文！（我的访问到芝加哥的中国城）

Here is a scan of my essay: https://imgur.com/LAmgNGN

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I'm just looking for constructive criticism... I'm eager to learn but not if you're an ass about it, I would love feedback on my writing. Even though I'm not close at all to being an advanced learner, I think I have retained a good amount of learned language skills from all the accumulated Chinese courses I have taken.

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I previously posted an essay on here before and now we have been assigned our last essay of the semester.

We were required to visit Chicago Chinatown in groups of 4, and we will end up presenting our experience to our class later on in the month as well as having to submit an essay about our own individual experience there.

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Here is what my professor outlines in the instructions as to what is expected for the peer review:

- Get feedback for improvements on contents (focus on expanding ideas)

Guide to peer:

- Ask questions to help the writer develop ideas

- Make comments and point out corrections

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I'd appreciate any feedback you guys have to offer! I love learning Chinese and being able to see what I did wrong or incorrect is super important for me to properly keep learning more advanced material.

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