Hallo guys, me and a friend collaborated writing a poem, please let us know if it's good !

The text was originally written in english but translated into mandarin, i'm still a beginner in mandarin and can't read hanzi and my friend is "somewhat intermediate" in her words. Please let us know your thoughts !

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“她是第九次降雨，

在第九次燥热之后，

每天早上出生，

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她完美不完美，

盛开的花从泥中发芽,

它开花了，开了花，开花了。"

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(The original english for context.)

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"She was the ninth rainfall,

After the ninth fervour,

Born every morning,

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She was imperfection,

Blooming flower sprouted from mud,

It's blooming and has bloomed, the flower."

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Please do let us know your thoughts, thank you !

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