My First Story (with no translator)

I've been learning Chinese over the last month and a half. I wanted to practice with a story about my pets. I'd love any comments or critiques!

我有一只狗和两只猫。我的狗叫小鼎。小鼎有三个腿。我的狗二岁。 小鼎喜欢牛肉。小鼎爱我的猫。我的猫不喜欢我的狗。我的猫爱吃饭。我的猫都是脂肪。我的猫爱鱼。

再见！

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