Please could you review my Chinese? I

请检查我的写话下列：

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我很失望。
七月十四号我开始新的日记只用汉语。
到七月十五，我停了！
我停了为了集中提高我的听力。[See Note 1]
从今天我会集中写句子因为。
我很难写对法语的句子。[See Note 2]
这使得说汉语很难。[See Note 3]

Note 1: Can I use 了 here? I've been told I need to use 下 but not sure why.

Note 2: Trying to say "I find it very hard to write grammatically correct sentences."

Note 3: Trying to say "This makes speaking Hanyu very difficult."

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I want my sentences to be as simple as possible as want to get the basics first. I'd be very grateful for any help you can give! Thanks!

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