Help me write a song in Mandarin!

Hey guys how are you? I'm testing a new method for learning Chinese, writing versions of songs from other languages. In this case, I tried writing a Chinese version of the traditional Italian protest song Bella Ciao, made popular recently by the show La Casa de Papel. I'm still a beginner, so the sentence structure is probably awkward and/or way off. I tried keeping it in the same rhythm as the original, I might try recording me singing it tomorrow to embarrass myself even further lol. Anyways here it goes, any suggestions, feedback, criticism, compliment or comment is welcome! Thanks!

一个早上， 我起了床。。。

哦美女人， 美女人， 美女人再见！

一个早上， 我起了床。。。

并找到了入侵者

哦党人把我带着走了

因为我觉得要去死

如果我死去, 如当党人

哦美女人， 美女人， 美女人再见！

如果我死去, 如当党人

你务必要埋葬我

你要埋葬我，上那坐山

在美花朵的影子下

并每个人通过着那里

哦美女人， 美女人， 美女人再见！

会说真漂亮的花！

这是党人的，党人的花

哦美女人， 美女人， 美女人再见！

为我们而的自由死

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