一个美国歌 (Beginner looking for feedback)

我是在西philadelphia生了的。

我常常在运动场。

我是在学校外边打篮球的。

有两个男人得不好。

我妈对我‘你去远’说。

我八点到了房子还对司机说了 ‘再见’。

我看房子， 我在这儿。我是bel-air王子。

I love learning languages by translating song lyrics. 这是我第一中文歌。

It's very rough as I'm a beginner, so any feedback would be very beneficial and appreciated.

谢谢！

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